Talk:Overdrive (Song)/@comment-2160520-20171004160605/@comment-49.177.14.195-20171004162159

Good job. It looks pretty solid to me (but I guess my Japanese isn't particularly great either).

I really like how you handled the "dou omotteru no kana..." part.

I guess the one thing I'd say is that I think the idea of "kimi bakkari de overdrive" is meant to be something more along the lines of "just thinking of you puts me in overdrive" (I guess more literally "just having you in my head...")

I also like to swap out "look at me" for "pay attention to me" when I do stuff like this because it can mean more than just looking with one's eyes, but whether you do that or not is your choice.